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I was hoping for this to be better. But it kinda failed. It still is pretty funny so watch and vote.
Not to bad..
Ehm the animation was good but there was little or no real story and the sound quality ruined it..
The grand recommendation
Genralzation of review: Well the was not your best work.
How to improve: first off try more modeling of the clay it is a little deformed no offense intended, second you should have accomplisses to help with proper movements and good audio, third this would be in my own opinion you should have support foundations for the clay keep more in place and not saggy.
Props: this was a very good animation poorly done though it is still a good plot for an animtion if you can make a series of competitions of the charecters and include new ones i will recommend you a collab
Your overall average: 7 of 10
if you have any questions on how this was graded in further detail pm me
haha!! i actaully kinda liked that! rock on!
I'de probably invest more time in the modeling and have someone else do the sound. The voice overs for me just ruined it. Good work on the stop framing though.
its not alive
it is just THOUSANDS of pics
Second-Year Animation Film (2015)
If you try eating the Mouse Cleaning Service, you gonna have a bad time...
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