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thnx to feedback,all bugs have been removed,and a new scene is added!
ok could be better
Well this was ok i did enjoy your artwork on the "CHARACTERS" but you could have used more effort in backrounds and more humor. so style up the backrounds more props and such and or color based backrounds for the extra measure, i had a pleasure watching this though
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first of all its an ok idea but needs some backround work, and abit more humor would also sufice
older flash but still entertaining, with abit more effort it can be gold
A decent start
Given that it was a trial, there were very few options, which didn't make it feel like much of a game. Granted, the graphics and effects were decent given when this was made. the storyline was a little hard to follow though, and at one point when going upstairs there wasn't an option to click on where there should've been.
drawings are alright I guess, but the humor is not funny, and there is no real reason why someone should submit something that is this far from being finished, that and what kind of a title is "LD'sEMpire;HDO->Update"?
Why submit unfinished work?
It seemed like this could have been a fun game to play but it wasn't finished, in fact you'd barely started it and you couldn't do much at all, half the stuff that was supposed to work didn't like the meeting room, nothing loaded and on the train if you choose to kill the guy, the cursor appears on his head for you to kill him but you can't it plays him being shot but then he comes back and doesn't die wtf? Also when you get off the train if you pick the other option you can do the same to the people on the satation if you want even though that's not actually what your supposed to do. At the start if you pick the shotgun the sound is like machine gun fire and not like a shotgun firing, wtf? Had you finished this off and had everything working properly you could ahve had a good game but this sucked.
Please don't submit demos to Newgrounds, especially if half the stuff in it doesn't work.
Bleh. My eyes hurt.
I hate reading. =| but this was a little RPG adventure. I don't even know what the storyline was all about and stuff. Just random killing. The guy even kills his own father. =O wat a deush! This movie could be ALOT better if you knew how to make everything less choppy and such. Anyways, good job on making this movie It probably took you a long time to get everything prepared. but I think you can do ALOT better.
The sequel to "Outpost:Haven"
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