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Well i thought you were going to led to a new scene with banana clock taking on the lock legion but it just ended abruptly which was alittle disappointing. I think you did a good job of drawing the background of banana clocks room, the jokes were also quite good however it was alittle hard to hear orange clock so it may have been a good idea to have added subtitles and also you seem to be missing sound effects for the cutting and shooting of the clocks. Overall it seemed like an unfinished project to me.
~H-J~