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The reason im putting up this scene is just so i can get some feedback on what i should improve, and what is already good. Praise me or blam the hell out of me, as long as you give me a good reason ill be satisfied.
Sprites are very limited in what they can do. It's actually much easier to make a good stick movie that would outmatch the sprites. And some people take the stick to a whole new level(See castle series for reference).
But if you are going to stick with it make the fight scene faster. Make they guy have less vertical and more horizontal jumps and give a little more attitude to the mages spells. Like a bit of aftershock following through the spell. A bit of energy coursing through him and outward during the casting. I know these are now new design ideas but sometimes the tried and true work better.
Since this is an unfinished product i can't really vote on it. But out of good heart I give it a ten since all the technical work was done well.
Good luck... And damn Eesti needs to shut the f*** up.
I don't like sprites. This is no exception.
I don' t think this is the best way to go in animation. Sprites have very very limited animation unless you add on yourself, which I'm sure takes a long time. I saw that this was just a base to see what you needed improvement on. If you do keep this up and remake it, make sure you add some good music. I think two characters fighting with light swords and using mind explosions should be fighting to an awesomely synthesized song. Something fast. But like I mentioned earlier, I don't think that sprites will get you far in life.
Needs Better Graphics
This movie needs better graphics, especially the explosion part... you shouldnt see the guy in the explosion...
I don't want to say it but...
...IT SUCKED!!!!!!!MAKE MORE CS MOVIES!!!!YOU GET A -1 FOR IT!!!
Very nice but, needs improving
The base of it was good. But you need a storyline. Try working longer on your productions. And also you could have made the fight much cooler.
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