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this will be on my site... i wanna know what ppl think so i know what to edit and what my strong points are... so please poste many reviews
Way too short
Why did this cut off so quickly? It wasn't that bad. The animation was good and I liked that you gave your stickmen faces. The names were pretty bad though. You could have added ,more than just camping "name here". It's not really that creative even if it does rhyme. Pretty basic stick fight unless you make it a bit better.
in dutch: het is kut
as they say in holland:
'het is kut'
tsk, tsk, tsk...
I've never seen such a shameless and awful rip-off of another flash (DE_DUST) that in itself wasn't that original to begin with. You have no saving grace here. Just give up.
well its not good but, its also not bad... so hopefully it won't get blammed...
now heres why..
1) YOu used bitmaps where there really should have been vector art. ( the dude with the red fangs head [Camping Kenny] was clearly a jpeg/gif... you didn't hide it two well there was a white matting border around it) i realize you brobably did this for the glowing red look.. but the same thing can be achieved by using the soften border option in flash...
2) the people were drawn with a paint brush... what would have been cool is if you had created a cople graphics in your library that were basically highly rounded rectangles to represent each body part (arm,calve,thigh) and then animated those...
3) it really looked like you were trying too hard to copy stuff like DE_DUST i'm talking about the text and stuff here... its not like you ripped the movie directly but rather that there were no fresh new ideas in it.
P.S. don't say that i don't know what i'm talking about because i haven't posted any thing... i've done a bunch of stuff that i don't feel like posting because they will have a score of around 2.5
P.P.S the brush drawn blood is in excuseable
P.P.P.S after the blue guy gets shot the movie goes white but the song continues for me
Dan, what the hell?
Now, I know that anything that has the word "demo" in it is probably crap. But, I figured "hey, maybe this one won't suck". But no... Dan has to prove my theory correct yet again... Allright, enough of that, onto why your movie is a giant piece of crap emitted from the genetic cesspool that you call your grandmother:
1)What the hell is BOW?
2)Is this a counter-strike movie? Because I've never seen a stick figure in counter-strike, and I've DEFINATELY never seen one smoking a blunt/cigar/whatever while shooting a stick figure hostage with Michael Jackson's head.
3)Ok, honestly, who uses the paintbrush for blood? Come on, grow some skill.
Overall, I'm very dissappointed in you, Dan. I think you can do better. So submit something that doesnt involve stick figures, because your stick figure-itude is -100 out of 10. Xiao Xiao is 10. Shithead.
Hey listen to me u little shit.... for starters... its cs and its not the easiest thing to make a flash of so stick figures naturally become the main idea... BOW is a clan Bio Organic Weapons... and if i want ill put micheal jackson's head being blown off you understand me. now if i wer u id put a flash on NG before u start critisizing because its not the easiest thing to do you dumb shit.
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