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Its my first movie with humor :}.Its very short.But please vote for me I
need your votes! just good !!! write me a letter because i am still looking for someone who has expierens with anime. I hope I will find a partner.
kaip lietuviuj dosiu 10 su 5
So that's how u do it in Lithuania...... :D lol
Well the concept it short but sweet. I gotta tell ya, i was expecting at first, something witty and "culturelle", u know like to tell people what it's like in Lithuania that way, but then when the girl was licking her lips, i knew this was going in a diferent way. I maybe thoight she was going to jumps over him across the table and start making out with him or something. lol, but I didn't quite think THAT was going to happen! it was fun........
Alittle weird, i mean you set the scene up nicely but you didnt really add much too it in terms of animation or humour. Ill give you that i thought that it was alittle funny though, but i dont believe that it was worthy of being the sole joke, maybe you should have had a joke that happened as a result of the action she took, but just ending it like that is alittle creepy to say the least. I thought that you did the character designs really well, and i think that the song was well chosen although i did think that it may have been over killed in terms of the quailty.
(Hamy_jamy isn't even suppose to be here today)
You need to improve
After viewing this movie I was wondering where the humor mentioned in the authors notes were. I suppose I either didn't get the joke or it wasn't funny enough to elicit a giggle. One or the other.
Aside from that though, the graphics are pretty good. You should really try to draw hands on your characters though, as a well drawn hand can help a drawing dramatically and add a sense of professionalism to it. Also you need to work on your sound editing, there were moments when the womans mouth was moving but nothing was being spoken. I believe if you put your mind to it and work on these areas you can do much better in subsequent works.
Once again I am a bit lazy to sort points,so I give you 10,besides I'm not greedy.
About your movie,it could have reason,you could make something what turns her on.
They just sit,that doesn't make any sense.
Pilot for my new show!
A story about a worm, a beetle and a very hungry bird…
New video for you to watch, while we wait for the next plague to happen...
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