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Ah FINALLY!Imp new drawing style and new opening theme!Oh yeah!ANd its getting better and better.Episode 11, the beginning of a 3 parter..Oh dear..
WTF is it?
Go home and watch Newgrounds parodies.
it was nice
The flash work was ok I guess (which is a compliment considering I'm picky) but not particularly funny.
1. If you honestly believe that was correct spelling, punctuation and grammar, then learn some written English. A typo is one thing, but that pisses me off. Though you could just get rid of the subtitles entirely, they were annoying me through the whole movie.
2. If you are one of those l33t speak tools whp tink intentally slaughtering werds, grammar and punctuation am funny, tehn stop it, their ghey!!!!!!111
(It's seriously not funny, it's tragic)
okay, advice 1:Congratualations!You have one of the 3 only attitues i hate!Grammar perfect!people who love maths are on the first place, and grammar on the third..Anyway, yes i know the spelling is bad.I dont even care.YOu see, the only reason there are subtitles is that people sometimes have trouble understanding the voices(especially the female voices)The subtitles are extras, not really part of the movie itself.I did have a lot grammar lessons for English at school, but fortunatly i decided to use that time usefull by practising drawing.Sorry if the bad grammar bothers you man, but they are only for help, not really part of the actual movie in my opinion.2.Woah now, i dont understand what your saying..I dont think bad grammar and stuff is funny, especially the persons complaining about it.I dont like the use of speaking tools either, but you want me to use my normal voice for female voices?Im sure you will be begging for the high pitch voices again.So i understand your complains perfectly, but i dont think i (can)(want)to do something about it.Just ignore my series then.Or watch episode 0, the only one without subtitles, and the only one i got complains about people who didnt understand the story.Nuff said.
How, uh... incoherant! o.O
Well, overlooking the bad spelling and grammar in the subtitles (your in place of you're, too in place of to, and misspelling a few words... sorry, that's just a BAD thing to do with productions!), I do admit I laughed a few times. But right after I laughed, the thing stared jumping around like an ADD kid on crack! I couldn't follow this thing if I moved at the speed of light! o.O
The audio was horrible. I almost had to turn off my speakers and read the thing. Try lowering the recording volume and using the editor's Amplify function to bring it up to an acceptable volume. I recommend Adobe Audition (free trial available), and view the range as dB. That way you can amplify it just right. Then, save the audio as a higher-bitrate MP3 (48kbps/mono works well), and NEVER use Stereo when encoding.
I would have to give the creator(s) lots of credit if they were 10-18 years old, because this stuff is top-quality for younger animators! Nice work, if that's the case! :D
yeah, i am 18 indeed..:S thanks for the advice
not exactly what i expected
heres a hint for your next movie... GET SOME BALLS
get some balls....You want a soccer movie?Well, i know what you mean, nude girls, blood guts and that stuff..Dont worry..I have something planned for ya.
Second-Year Animation Film (2015)
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