Score: 0
"Now I don't want this removed..."
date: October 25, 2009
... but this is boring. What the hell? The animations are choppy at best and the anatomy is just screwed. Let's not forget the sad plot! Gad, this is retarded.
Now, I'll give you some pointers:
One: Drop "Brickhouse Betty"; the franchise in and of itself sucks on ice. I don't care what porn industry screwballs seem to think: this SUCKS.
Two: Practice frames per second and so on. Animation needs to be smooth and consistent throughout, otherwise you lose the audience in the irritating lag.
Three: Practice flash design. Nothing says boring like designing things like a comic strip. Break it up and lose the black lines(and typical models).
Four: Observe the competition. What makes their crap so good? Find out, and use the info for your advancement(do NOT plagerize: fans of the popular stuff will flame you for the cheap knock-offs).
Five: Think of a good premise to start with, and then criticize it. The more you work on something, the more you can improve.
I hope this helps more than it hurts. Have a good day.
-HdR
