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Oh god, this is my first ever cartoon. I fear ridicule. I still don't know how to use a bunch of stuff, but leave a reply if you think I suck...
For your first try, this is pretty good. There are a lot of shit-for-brains on this site that will use the first try excuse to get away with not putting any effort in. I like your goofy art style, too.
I was most infatuated with the "eight seconds earlier..." flashback... usually one expects an "eight seconds later..." I enjoy the art style.. some people may say it looks silly but i get the feelingit isd meant to be that way. I like it.
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This reminds me of the student animations I saw a truckload of in the 1980s. Bear in mind these students were going to University at the time and were still turning out stuff like this. Don't sweat it this is a good first start.
It made me laugh anyways!
Funny shit, man.
That's pretty good for your first try. I think you've got potential.
None the less, Ineteresting...
Well, Considering that you are a newbie to Flash I wont be hard on you. Keep playing around with the possibilities and have fun.
A short film about a park bench
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