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This story is based on a comic book a friend and I wrote. Also, this is my first flash film and while I think its ok I know its something I could make a billion times better now.Please check out www.gbgink.com for more of my flash stuff!
I like the idea for it. and the graphics looked good. the animation could be a bit better, but overall I like it alot.
Not bad for a first.
Nice animation. But one thing kinda puzzles me..... WHAT THE DAMN HELL WAS THE RED THING??!?? It looked like that one red guy from the movie Hell Boy! Overall I give this probally a 4. :}
but not great. You say you could have done that a million times better, and I agree. Good animation, but just a little more effort into this wouldv'e made it much more enjoyable. For example, the dialogue, music, and sfx volumes were way out of wack. They should be leveled properly. Secondly, the story was daft. It might have been cool in a comic book, but there's just not enough here. You should expand on it. And finally,is your main character supposed to hellboy? He certainly looked like a rip off, I don't care if you say you created him, I know my comics, and you did not create Hellboy.
Great use of the sound with the graphics. I wouldn't change a thing!
That is a very touching story, the graphx weren't bad, humor, nun, action, sumwut, but the story wuz ver very touching, i like it, keep it up
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a clock day story
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