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The Matrix RB Part 3
Added 3D effects.. more violence.
Part 4 will be about 3 minutes long and have pure violence.
Expect it in 1-2 weeks.
Problems with your The Matrix: RB movies:
1. Graphics: If your going to make your flash like the famous Madness series, you need more movement, adding a little trench coat movement doesn't cut it. Also you should have at LEAST made "Virus'" hand hit the ground instead of his head during his front flip.
Things you need to learn to draw:
Bullets (It was a spike launched from a multitude of blocks)
Objects (Like your motorcycles)
Give EVERYTHING color, you have brown chairs, red motorcycles, red blood, but the black coats are gray and the backgrounds have almost no color, either be true to Madness with black and white and red blood, or put color in
2. Sound: I really enjoy the music you pt on these movies, thats probably one of the only things you've got going for you in this series. You could use some work on sound effects and your music doesn't really fit the scene...accept in Part 1.
Things to add sound to:
When keys are inserted into doors
3. Characters: The new 'One'...Sure...Anyway, you might have a good movie if you work on the character portraying and what they do. The Oracle mentioned that 'Virus' and 'Claw' creating a new reality, but all Claw does it sit there on his crappily drawn motorcycle. 'Virus' does EVERYTHING.
3a. Subtitles: Ok, I like you you have SOMETHING to do besides watch your movies, like read the subtitles...Which you can't do either...You should make your subtitles in an understandable format because I was completely lost. Heres how it should be done:
<Name>: <What they're saying> ex. Virus: You know why I'm here...
Things to work on:
Understandable subtitles (I cant even understand your plot)
You said there were to be plot twists...I don't see any...In fact, I don't even see a PLOT!
For Claw to get off his arse
And/Or voice actors
An episode that explains WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON!
I hope this constructive response helps...your really need to work on this series, its like a cheeseburger without cheese...Jesus Christ...
no sound, no good, stupid
where what the sound? what was the point. i got so board that i just stop watching.
Dude, your movies are to freaken short. The only sound there is, is the background music. AND THE TWINS CANNOT BE DEAFEATED THAT EASILY! Get in line man. When I saw the first one, I saw something good coming, but not anymore.
No offense but sometimes your plot dosen't make sense and why do they look like marshmellows. anyway it's kinda ok but I've seen better keep up the work I guess
The Matrix things for Flash movies are being really overdone by everyone as a whole...so I'm not really buying into it anymore. I don't understand as to why they look like the Stay Puft Marshmallow man either...but I did like the way it was drawn up, so it's not a bad score.
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