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This is my second submitted movie so please tell me what you think I could do to improve on it when writing a review. This movie is best seen in Med. quality. I hope you enjoy it!
well you tried...
Not a bad start.
Your humor is great. Work on your art a little and try to end the habit of using sprites. But overall, I liked it.
pretty good but u needs to be longer
HAHAHAHAHA that was pretty cool
I could tell the you tried but right now you just dont have enough skill. Keep at it!!!
Common guys.....there's alot more shitty stuff that gets into the portal than this. Its not that bad. I think he's got some great potential, just needs some more work. Here's some ideas for improvement. 1.) Fix the gunshot for when he shoots at the panel. 2.)Add more of a story to it. Its hard to tell what the hell is going on really. 3.) Show more action scenes(make the action scenees longer). 4.)You shoot first....what the hell? IS that guy a moron or something? And how did he take out a huge ship like that in one shot?
This movie needs some work, make a few adjustments and it'll be a real winner.
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