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xtra Blam Movie - Torched

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Uploaded
Jan 24, 2004 | 5:47 PM EST

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I was bored with the laser blam movie..
So i made this

Maybe as an alternative blam movie?
That you either get to see the laser or this one?

All comments welcome! (well, exception to racisme and hatred)

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jackassunit5jackassunit5

Rated 3 / 5 stars

not bad some problams

im sure u know abotu the grammar no biggie u can fix thta the music thoguth whne it loops it really kills the whole mood overall not too bad if u wnat to get it into a second blam movie send it to the fulps good luck



i1011ii1011i

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

It was pretty tight except for the soundtrack.

Dude that flash like totally rocked'n'stuff. But you need to pick a better soundtrack! Plus the gap in the loop made my brain bleed.



EarfetishEarfetish

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Not bad

Better than the original one, at least. But, in additiuon to the previous reviewer, it should have an apostrophe in 'elses' asd the work belongs to someone else.

"You torched somebody else's hard work."



ryguypieryguypie

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

"you just torched somebody else his hard work"

Just thought I'd point out the error in the quote above... incase you speak some foreign language or something... you never know...

"You just torched somebody elses hard work"


Imahilus responds:

Im dutch, yes
Though the sentence, grammer wise, is correct
else's is an abreviation
his just links back to 'somebody else'
But even besides that..
Is newgrounds full of correct grammer?
even the message posting secret shows: 'somebody sez:'
But ive heard it before, and i really dont mind changing that line.. but i havent heard anything better >.<


CyberdevilCyberdevil

Rated 3 / 5 stars

That was GOOD!

Great animation.That was great.Almostas good as the real one.