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I was bored with the laser blam movie..
So i made this
Maybe as an alternative blam movie?
That you either get to see the laser or this one?
All comments welcome! (well, exception to racisme and hatred)
not bad some problams
im sure u know abotu the grammar no biggie u can fix thta the music thoguth whne it loops it really kills the whole mood overall not too bad if u wnat to get it into a second blam movie send it to the fulps good luck
It was pretty tight except for the soundtrack.
Dude that flash like totally rocked'n'stuff. But you need to pick a better soundtrack! Plus the gap in the loop made my brain bleed.
Better than the original one, at least. But, in additiuon to the previous reviewer, it should have an apostrophe in 'elses' asd the work belongs to someone else.
"You torched somebody else's hard work."
"you just torched somebody else his hard work"
Just thought I'd point out the error in the quote above... incase you speak some foreign language or something... you never know...
"You just torched somebody elses hard work"
Im dutch, yes
Though the sentence, grammer wise, is correct
else's is an abreviation
his just links back to 'somebody else'
But even besides that..
Is newgrounds full of correct grammer?
even the message posting secret shows: 'somebody sez:'
But ive heard it before, and i really dont mind changing that line.. but i havent heard anything better >.<
That was GOOD!
Great animation.That was great.Almostas good as the real one.
Pilot for my new show!
A story about a worm, a beetle and a very hungry bird…
New video for you to watch, while we wait for the next plague to happen...
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