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Not having to watch one of these pardoies ever again: "PRICELESS"
AND TO THOSE OF YOU THAT RATED THIS A ONE BECAUSE IT WAS UNORIGINAL IN 2002 AND 2003 - HOW ABOUT YOU LOOK AT THE F*CK!NG SUBMISSION DATE YOU PR!CKS!
Well it was notbad, i thought the ending was funny though, you should think about adding more humor though, as these card flashes have been done manytimes
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add something new besides all the flashing, make it differant then all the other simular flashes
An ok flash but does need some more ideas
whoa whoa whoa
how can you get mad at people for calling this unoriginal. By the time this came out, there were already a bunch of mastercard parodies here on Newgrounds, I know this because I've just seen a BUNCH of them, so YES, the reviewers probably did se your submission date. Anyway, on to the actual review. There's not much originality here, there is very little original drawing if any and the animation is basically non existant besides the typing of the letters which is by no means an impressive animatorial feat.
This wasn't very original, mastercard parodies, by late May 2000, were already done to death. The graphics were actually pretty good, but you definitely didn't use them to their fullest potential. The music worked well for the flash, and the typing was alright. Still, it just wasn't all that enjoyable. It didn't make too much sense really. You make it sound slike it's gonna be an old person or something, for some reason. Don' tknow why.
*Groans* Yet another MasterCard advert parody
Come on man pull the other one, the idea to parody the MasterCard advert was unoriginal when this was submitted, they'd already been loads of flash movies on Newgrounds parodying it before you decided to submit this. It's probably the second best one I've seen (The Priceless Portal being the only good one), due to the fact that it wasn't just a collection of pasted images and you'd actually drawn the stuff yourself, but it still sucked, it wasn't funny the first time around, the fact that people made more and more just made it even less funny.
The picture at the end was funny so you get a 1 for humor and the fact you drew stuff yourself earns you a 1 for style.
Not bad. Its interesting to see this concept in a flash form. The animation in flash was not too bad. I think you need to work on sound levels and proper mixing. Average work though.
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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