It tried too hard

It seems to me that the best thing here was the animation. S-Man looked reasonably good, it would have been a bit better if his movements (like rocking back and forth) were a bit smoother and more realistic. While this concept has a lot of great potential, it seemed like you tried way too hard to get cheap laughs (what was all that crap describing his lightening ball?), which took away from the experience. So, I think that S-Man could be a lot funnier if you put a bit more thought into the storyline. Also, I think you've got the potential to be a pretty good animator, so work on that some more. Just trying to be helpful.

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Well you put Matrix glasses on, you look like rayman and you have a name similiar to superman what do you get????? S-man

((( WELL ITS A START )))

Character design hmmm ok well, dont start off with just circles, mold those circles into a body of some sort and use shades and so-on, its kinda simple and needs more, but it will have to due for now i guess...

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dont listen to any other ppl this is another masterpiece from bluepill good work plz make another it made me laugh for 1 hour straight.

Lots of talk, but no game

Yeah, I just read your review of the flash "Widow". It runs circles around your little piece. While I am not a flash artist myself, I dont go around pretending I am and blaming other peoples good work. Its obvious by your review of "Widow", that youre still a pimple popping teen with no taste.