Fun game

Like these click and play game love all the interactivity, the "VIEW-SCREEN" is rather small so you should think about adding a larger view screen so you can show much more of the content and small details that are missed with a smaller view screen. Overall a fun game here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
you should think about adding a larger view screen so you can show much more of the content and small details that are missed with a smaller view screen. and the voices could be a little bit sharper.

~X~

I like the story and trying to figure everything out. The graphics are okay, and could use more detail. The major issue is the small screen size. It should be normal size.

Hmpf

well this would be alot better if there was, "hints" as to the next step
repeating the same thing over and over drives me crazzy for the odveous reason of that it is boreing!
its an ok consept but there needs to be... well options. for instance make 2 of the choices equial different outcomes not just the same one over and over again

4

The idea of having a rpg on Newgrounds is not that new, but it is interesting in this context. The graphics need some work, as does the voice. Nice background music, but it did get boring after a while. I would work on the animation, and you could have something.

Ryan

Looking forward to more.

It's pretty short, but rather good. I'd like to see many more. Once you've finished all of the volumes of the story, I suggest that you compile them all into one game.

Your artwork is decent, the voices are a nice touch, and I think this has quite a bit of potential.