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Another good one
I really like your graphics and animation. I would like to see you make something longer. Than most you other works. I think Noah is the best.
That it has a lot that these other two are lacking a story line. Still some good work here. I hope to see more from you in the future.
Thank you very much!
This animation was very creative, sad, and inspirational. Great work Siard.
Thank you for watching all my animations and for the reviews:) I appreciate it!
You have "it"
So, let´s start with the bad: your animation (the movement ) isn´t too good. It looks rough. But it isn´t worse than the average animation, wich leads me to the good:
Your extremely accurate selection of music, the smooth blend of colors, and those melancholic, but fresh (fresh like rain) stories create such an atmosphere, such a armonic atmosphere, that when i see the average animation, it brakes it down for me. Shutters the illusion.
You are one step away from excellence. You have a good instinct for colors, you know they mean something. You know that everything you hear also means something, and that music has a texture of its own. You know how to create ambient with the right combinations of colors, music, and moments (wich is directing).
My only advise to you, besides "keep doing great flash" is work on your animation (Oh, and try drawing better, your last flash had problems in the character´s proportions, and that also broke the illusion). Try watching Eric Drobile, he´s the best animaiton-wise.
Hope I´m helpful, thanks for that great quiet moment while watching your work.
Thank you very much! It's a really good review:) I will work on those things you noticed. You're helpful:D
that was very chill and serene like, good film mate :)
so sad bout the wolf cub.
great flash, a little confusing, cause i thought the wolf drawing stuff was on the paper on the table, but its just some stuff like a portfolio.
plus you're music choice is great.
Thank you very much:)
Pilot for my new show!
A story about a worm, a beetle and a very hungry bird…
New video for you to watch, while we wait for the next plague to happen...
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