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This is the first animation I did. Be gental
"Look at the fart I just let out!" This is VERY good for a newbie flash
i'm being nice
just like evryone else said...turn down the mic. or get a better one or something. it could have been funnier
sound was crap
this kinda reminded me of doin those shitty little drama pieces at school at the age of 11,u thought it was good at the time but then u look back and realise how crap it really was.
the story was ok,but it didnt move quick enough,and as the whole movie evolved around speech,u could have at least found a good mic.
the only reason it got a 4 was cuz it was 1st time effort-still shouldnt help it, but hey,im generous.
heh cool for ur first time.....whyd u censor?
pretty good , but ended too abruptly .
for a first effort i found this to be outstanding. the storyline was good , a little dry perhaps , but original . the animation was good and sound was very good the only fault i have is int he ending . i look for good things from this artist int he future
It's time for Rifftrax...
Detective Nwar and his partner Blanche might as well investigate a water crisis.
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