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Paradise Lost (and Paradise Regained) are public domain. Go search em out on the web and read em yourself! Their marvelous.
Update - Added subtitles! Hope that helps.
oh my "god"
no really, it's not well made.
your voice acting is awfull, the story is very badly interpreted
read the book
the graphics are beginner style
I don't understand how you got such a high score....
I'll never have the courage to watch it again.
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE tell me you're not going to make 12 other of them....
From a purely cosmetic stand point: The mouths continue to move even when the characters stop talking.
The subtitles don't line up with the audio.
Satan (?) is too quiet, I wanted to turn up the volume (but didn't), which leads into that Astaroth (?) was way too loud!
The other thing about the mouths that bugged me is some (Beelzebub, for instance) had free-form mouths, whereas others (Astaroth...) had perfectly circular mouths, with parallel teeth within.
That was - very well rendered, Steph.
You are in desperate need of voice actors I can see that. With such an incredible and tasking a project as you have put upon yourself to tell these tales of the Paradise Lost, you may find others quite willing and glad to help you in this saga you have prepared.
Very well done.
Looking forward to Book 2. :)
that was great!!
the only thing i didnt like was the voices, they were really hard to understand. but, if you fixed that up it would really be awsome. i gave a 5 because of style of the whole movie being based on paradise lost. can't wait for paradise regained :)
It was allright. It had a very unique style to it, and the graphics and music were pretty good, even though I couldn't always hear what they were saying, and therefore it was a bit hard to understand itentierly. Maybe you could have subtitles?
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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