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If your twisted then.. well.. enough said.
it was an attempt
There wasn't any plot. There wasn't any good animation. And there wasn't any suspense.
My constructive critisism?
Give it a plot, better animation, and suspense :D
it was okay
it was just so-so, not too special.
Nothing too great here. The plot seems quite slight and nonsensical. At first it just seems like this creature is in the woods and the man is killed at random because hey, wrong place, wrong time. But then with the creture turning up at the mans house with his corpse to kill the rest of the family, it seems like the attack wwas more than random. Of course, it wasn't explained just what the creature was or anything so it would have been nice to have a bit more of an explanation/closure.
The part where the dad got out the car needed to be longer before the creature got him, from then on it was stupid, the creature somehow turns up at the guys house with the dad's dad body then kills the mum and the son. The idea was kinda nice you just neede to have more suspense to it as this movie really lacked it.
The screaming was off when the thing bit off her head.
otherwise it wasn't too bad.
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