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big file uh? ive working hard so i hope u enjoy... u better! lol jk have fun!
Not a single laugh.
Sorry, you're cartoon was boring the ass off me. The animations not very good. Some of the sound was great but navi was even more annoying than she is in the game.
not that funny
kinda made me sad b'cuz link kept getting hit D:
Just didn't do it for me
I saw both this and your new addition, and I just wasn't impressed. I reviewed your second one already, and what I said there can be applied to this as well.
I don't want you to take what I say against you as a person, I am simply looking at what you have submitted in terms of:
1) What are you trying to do?
2) How do you go about doing it?
3) What should or does the audience expect?
4) Did I like it, and why/not?
Your intent is clear: Amusement. You want us to laugh at a well known video game hero. You go about it by having him do incredibly stupid things. The audience expects to be amused by this.
What killed it, in my own opinion, is the overstatements of Links stupidity. We can already figure out that the Link you have presented is a moron. Navi doesn't need to say anything.
What I think you should do in the future is go for a "Less is More" approach, that is, when you're making your next flash, go over every single scene, every line of dialogue, every action in the flash, and constantly ask yourself "Do I need this? Is this element necessary to get my point across?" Constantly ask yourself if something is redundant, and if it is, get rid of it.
I hope this is helpful. I am not trying to bash you as a person, I am simply stating that I did not like this flash, and I am giving my reasons as to why.
Kinda predictable, and not all that funny. Only part where I actually laughed was the 3D-glasses part. Still, awesome graphics and sound, but the storyline and humor needs work.
That was not even funny
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