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Just.... finished.... IT!
I fixed the bad sounds, they're from CS now!
This was made in 11 days.
I changed the storyline while I was in the middle of this Flash. Before, it had the Government demanding Global Domination. This one is Human VS. Machines!
SORRY FOR THE TERMINATOR-LIKE STORYLINE! Heh
It wasn't that great. In fact, it was bad.
I have nothing more to say.
In fact, your an asshole. You set your standards too high.
umm... Nice try, I guess....
Ditto Needles. You took the words right out of my mouth.
Your movie is nothing more than a lot of glorified dialogue. You need to work on your storytelling. We're forced to endure a long scene regarding ammunition that seems to go on and on forever, which is more or less pointless, since in the next scene we're not focusing on any one person anyways. And then they all get killed, rendering that dialogue even more useless.
Why were the robots bickering? This is not a plot point. You seem to be filling in time.
Fifteen people cannot repopulate a large force in fifty years.
Your epilogue borders on ridiculous. It's convoluted; you've got 5 minutes worth of story in the animation, then hundreds of years of story in text? And then all is for naught? Why even bother telling the story at all?
I don't mean to sound harsh, but you've got to work on your storytelling skills. I would go back, re-write it, and try again.
Did you miss the skip button? It was on the left side
but it could use a lot more polish.
This is something....
Just a quick quote on your conclusion:
"If it's possesive, it's just I-T-S, but if it's an contraction, it's I-T-apostrophe-S.... scalawag"
(- Strong Bad of Homestarrunner.com)
I'm not trying to pick on you personally, this is a common problem and one of my pet peeves.
Here are some other things that didn't work for me:
The doubled background - I couldn't figure out if it was a mistake or what... and the seam threw me off big time too.
The human's walk cycle... Didn't do it for me. Sorry.
I also couldn't figure out why the conclusion contained so much information, when it could have been made into sequels to this movie.
Overall, this was a good flash, although it was a tad slow.
I tried experimenting with the walking cycle, it didn't come out good at all. I only do sequels unless it's requested A LOT.
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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