good
i like the storyline its a good seiries
Author Comments
I needed a lot of time to do this, because I have other things to do, like school, that are very important. I hope you enjoy this movie. I'm gonna put a lot of effort in the sequel.
Good
I like these movies :) Keep it up!
WTH?
I wish you would just put the whole thing into newgrounds at once. And also, make little bubbles for speech and the credits so people can read fast or slow.
Erm...
The idea isn't too original... but the way the plot opens in this flash is better than what I've seen in other flash toons. Too bad the graphics aren't up to par... Never have I seen characters walking sideways to move UP. You should also work on your grammar a bit.
Never seen anything like it
Man that is the first time i have seen a story like yours it is good as a base for a series.