Score: 3

"urmmm...."

by: Ketsueki258

date: January 13, 2008

not really funny,

It's just a crude attempt at base humor - the plot (or lack thereof) seemed to merely have a go at the 'fatty' there was no real substance at all - many people have made flashes doing the same thing so it's hardly unique.

On a more positive note the audio was alright. :) And the michael jackson-like clerk was quite funny :D

Score: 10

"wow! props man!"

by: Souljaadam

date: March 10, 2007

wow it was jokes man..

lol FEEED MEE!!

5/5
It was nice knoein u man.....
R.I.P.
Souljaadam

Score: 7

"umm guy before"

by: CRASH-1678

date: March 5, 2006

Yeah this guy has an issue, can you guess? well here it is, HE'S DEAD!
but either way i think it was kinda funny, nice animation, nothing great but not bad,

RIP livecorpse!
-Crash-

Score: 9

"...."

by: Kuze77

date: February 26, 2005

to the previous reviewer Livecorpse cant read your review hes dead been dead itttts a good flash anyways

Score: 3

"Waste of time..."

by: MystWilliams

date: October 20, 2004

I thought this was absolutley horrible.
Now i am assuming you were trying to acheive comedy. Sadly, it lacked comedy entirely. The only thing cool about it was the cursor.
I didnt even smile or chuckle, let alone laugh.
Unless it is s'posed to be personally funny, like you flipped once when you missed the disgusting McDonalds breakfast. It really does not make any sense. And it isn't even random comedy. Or disgusting comedy. Or dark humour. It just absoluelty positively is stupid, pointless, retarded, immature and quite, all in all, dumb.

I am going to try and give you some contructive criticism, but that could take all day.

I will start with your aniamtion. Your cartoony look isnt bad, but the animation did not transition well at all. It was not the smoothest i have ever seen. However, not only does you animation need work, but your art as well.

The audio was horribly, oh ya, was that an attempt at comedy again? Or were you adding to the obviousness of the movie.

Hey i like Ng Time Trial... honestly, but this one was pathetic. You can do WAY better. This fast put togethor flash should embarrass you. It embarrasses me for being a fan. Maybe this score is so high because of your popularity. Or maybe the people who have viewed it have lack of insight or not the balls to go against you. Because you are a very well repected artist. I love some of you past works. Just this one, by far, is your worst.

There was no real story... going to McDonalds and then biting someones head off then exploding is not a story, plot, or - well, anything.

Were you high when you made this? That would at least explain some things.

So please, don't waste your time making crappy flash; and dont waste my time by having me watch it.

I cannot say anything good about this flash except that the cursor was cool. The kill button would have been cool, if the scene it skipped to was any good.

Also, your voice over audio was not very good either.

All around, i really did not like it. However, i do have respect for you as a flash animator.

NG Critic Rating
Introduction: 2.2
Impression: 4.1
Style(Graphics): 4.1
Movement: 4.1
Audio: 1.2
Humor: 0.1
Originality: 6.9
Storyline: 0.1
Personal Enjoyment: 3.2

Overall: 2.7
Rating: 1

K. Myst Williams