Score: 7

"((( HMMMMMM )))"

by: XwaynecoltX

date: December 1, 2003

Hmmmmm this was interesting it also has a very mark feel to it and by that i mean mark creator of comet magnum series, cause your front page is almost exact to his, hmmmmmm, heh anyways good game like movie, nice effects and dark feel to it...

MOVIE COMMENTARY: Very mark-ish...

~X~

Score: 6

"About Fonts..."

by: Windd

date: December 1, 2003

Generally it's acceptable to use 2 different fonts in any certain project: One Serif or gaudy font such as you have used already, and a san-serif, which is a font without any little flourishes. The Gaudy font should really only be used for Titles, and possibly subtitles, because if they're used for normal reading, they can be very hard to follow, which is the case in this flash. The font used for the dialogue here is somewhat hard to read, and the really gothic font you use at the beginning doesn't work at all when you're telling us about the next episode.

Also, "firmiliar" should be "familiar", "I've", not "i've". "You've losed your sword" could possibly be better worded as "You've LOST your sword"

Anyway, good luck with your flash, and I look forward to your next one. =)

Score: 6

"not bad"

by: Bit-Orane

date: December 1, 2003

not bad at all......looks good but sounld have been alot longer but overally not bad (not great)but sum nice lil things

Score: 10

"Fuck yes"

by: Dry-Ice

date: December 1, 2003

Well Done... The dragon Lookin A Bit Familliar...
=P

Score: 6

"too short."

by: Strauss

date: December 1, 2003

it caught my eye, but it was too short. i like the small bit of interactivity though, and look forward to seeing the next episode.