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Its really first thing i made to enter into newgrounds, hopeing to make something decent enough not to get blammed. But if its on the verge give me some pointers on how to make it better. Thanks, (its a bit short sorry
Nice, but maybe touch up the dudes abit more, they look to much like... blob figures.
Decent but short.
The scene was nice but the only real downside is that it was too brief.
Graphics: 4, decent animation and drawing but realism wouldn't have hurt.
Style: 5, length was an issue, it looks rushed, there for not too much style...
Sound: 7, nice music that fits the scene.
Violence: 9, it is a fight scene after all
Interactivity: 0, nothing to be ashamed of, this wasn't meant to be a game or anything.
Humor: 5, all in all enjoyable
Overall: 5, could use some touch ups but decent enough.
Wow. Drunk stick figure Matrix fighting...
How original. Man. Why do we need so many senseless and useless fighting blurbs? You can't even call them movies, because movies have a little thing called a "plot". I would give you something if it was a unique fighting sequence, but it wasn't. The bullet shot from the gun went the wrong direction, there is no detail and there is nothing to signify that they are even remotely intoxicated. Now if they were swaggering all over the place and puking on each other in mid air in bullet time and fighting with broken glass bottles THEN you might have something. The only true props I can give you is that the animation was somewhat fluent and you found a nice background. Too bad your characters couldn't live up to it. Next please.
Well Well, Mr. Tuck
Har har har, I'd just like to stat out saying that I found this entry and thought this might be a decent movie, but when I watched it, I was thourghly suprised at how bad it was. As to the fact that it was your first, I seem to remember an artist by the exact same name as this so called 'Nick Tuck' that submitted a movie of this style and quality that was deleted within the first 3 minutes.
Dealing with the style, I thought hey, this is totally original, bodies with no arms or legs. But again, I remembered another entry by my good friend NathanKalk. It seems that this 'flash plagarist' (I just made that term up) copied that movie's sytle almost to the exact. The only difference is that NathanKalk's movie was acutally of decent length and quality. You can find it at http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view.php?id=83083
By now, I bet you are saying 'Hey, you gave him a 2 point overall score and you've totally bashed his movie, what's that all about?'. Well my good friend, I gave those points to him becuase of the sound in his movie. It's not becuase the sound in his movie is good, oh no...it's far from it, it is the fact that he has some. If he actually had a decent movie, I would have taken away points becuase of the sound, but I'm a nice guy. So I'll cut him some slack. Though this will forever take up space on newgrounds that could be more usefull taken up by flash movies of two hampsters dancing for 5 minutes straight, I figure we could at least have some justice in this by rating it as low as possible.
payton get a life lol, if u read it it says first thing i really made to enter into ng. didn't say i didn't enter in new stuff. btw you dont know crap and your game looks a whole lot like nathans.. btw the figures me and nate both took off a nother guy of a star wars light saber animation.. get a life pedro
THe animation is smooth, but you should add more detailed characters, like their faces and body. And also make it longer, one important thing on Newgrounds it to have the movies long, because more movies that are short get lower scores. Overall nice job on this.
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