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weekly informative #2

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Nov 16, 2003 | 2:45 AM EST

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as you can all tel there is a difference between the weekly informer and the weekly informative. the informer is the finished verson of the flicks while the informative is my test flicks so that i can see what improvments i should make and if any ine has any good suggestions. so sit back and get a sneak peek ofnext weeks program. and a very special thanks to my weenie! if it weren't for her being so fat (13 pounds over weight) and her ever so loveable tapdancing, i would have had a dry spell. well do enjoy
-matman-

Reviews


gizmo13gizmo13

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Not that bad...

Needs more sounds. A gulping/vacuum sound would have been perfect for the inhaling scenes. Try not to get to repetitive next time.



flamestickflamestick

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

wasn't THAT bad.

It was ok. The characters were kinda messed up, but I guess it was good.



VINVIN

Rated 5 / 5 stars

disturbing

meaning it was good and hilarious, what the hell was it, i have no idea, but still hilarious



cyhortcyhort

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

good

it was good but im just posting a review so i dont have to look at that pompous asshole talking like hes the god of flash.



PhobotechPhobotech

Rated 2 / 5 stars

Mediocre

It was a mediocre job. In order for this particular flash to be MORE than mediocre you need the following DESPEREATELY...
- You really need a preloader...There is nothing sleazier in a flash than having it JUST START and then when it's the end, it just starts over again. This is the shit that makes blammy material, make sure you have a preloader/start button/restart button in the future.
- Sound. A little tune hummed by what sounds like insects for 8 seconds in a 26 second flash dosn't really qualify for sound quality...for example, you could have a "ribbit" for the frog, barking, a vacuum noise, the bus honking, etc...
- Interesting Plot. Come on, a frog inhaling a stick figuire and then a dog inhaling everything from Stop signs to Muppits? This is meaningless violence... Now if the violence had meaning, then that would be cool, but as it stands, it's just another senseless "KILLKILLKILLKILLKILLKILLKILL!!!" flash.
- Humor. There wasn't any...this needs to come from your imagination so work on it...

All in all, you got some ways to go, keep at it though...

Phobos Technology, Phobotech.