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Here's the second Flash I've Tried. I put alot of work into a whole movie but I slacked off towards the end. I've decided to submit only the intro to see if anyone thinks it is even worth finishing. Send me any thoughts.
Not bad done, but impossible to understand the theme of the game...
Add more stuff
You should add more so people have atleast an idea about what to expect and such, but it had potential. good luck
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Needs more info, so its not so bland
not really very good as a preview, it really gives the audience no Idea of what to expect or even if this is supposed to be a comedy, an action, a thriller or what. An effective preview should leave people wanting more, otherwise it is counterproductive.
(title in work)
The art wasn't too bad. Looks like you've got some skill drawing people.
This was really bad for an intro. First off, it's not a game or interactive at all. Not a big issue, but whatever. Also, this had no intro to the storyline or characters, just what they looked like. You could have added some scene to show the storyline or at least some kind of animation skills.
This flash would have had some potential, I think, had you actually submitted the whole thing instead of just the intro. The graphics were pretty good overall, the people looked pretty well drawn. The intro in itself would make a decent intro for the actual flash, were you to create it. Nothing really happened in the intro though, so it was no big deal to watch.
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