Score: 10
"Awesome"
date: November 5, 2003
I have been watching NG flash for a long while so i think my opinions carry some weight... Comet Magnum is most definitely the most amazing series there is on NG. it wouldnt let me put more than a 10 on the "overall score" part, sorry.
just a few constructive criticisms and compliments, to help you with your next cartoons:
1) your original style kicks major ass, keep it
2) your concept of a good plot has become better since your first episodes, i think you have an excellent ability there
3) sound: voices would be awesome, but i think that would give a different effect to your cartoons
4) i like how you repeated the music; it added an awesome style to the series. if you expand your repatoire to include more music themes, you should repeat those as well
5) the biggest problem i had with your flash was the spelling, and that was minor. just use a spell check
6) punctuation, too
as yet i don't have flash so i dont intend on doing any flashes myself anytime soon, but i have a character who's a hired assassin... no moral values or anything, and i was wondering if you had any tips.
anyway, your flash rocks my world, and i wish you the best of luck on your future stuff