It's pretty good

It was very good, but it could be better. Try taking the tutorials and if you can, get a good microphone and record some voices.

Not too bad...

Not bad... Considering that this is one of your first flash movies... Don't worry... You'll get better... Keep it up and you'll see...

Yay!

I loved the sound and the graphics, If it was longer, it had been one of the best flashes made!

could be better

This is quite a good movie but could be better, Its a good idea, make it longer.

well....

i would have given you a higer score if u had made it longer than just 1 min of nonsense lol but otherwise if u made summin out of it, i wouldve been great!!! P.S. i liked the music and loved the graphics, DRAW MORE