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Everything was made by me! I drew everything and did all voices IT TOOK 2 DAYS TO MAKE! My balls hav dropped now!
No they havent
Voices sucked, animation was okay.
Thats just...i dont even know what to say bout it cuz its that bad! You need to improve some.
Well He Killed Somebody....MISSION ACCOMPLISHED
It seemed from the voice acting that you were really young so you may not even be able to read this but here we go.... This was poorly animated; voice acting was terrible, not enough experience watching the news. Have you even seen a news program? The music was crappy, and obviously you are a big racist douche. Why was the guy black huh? Just because you are eight years old, does not mean that you have to make flashes about killing black people. That guy probably just wanted to show people his knife collection and you made a flash so racist.... that you just downright murdered a guy. I don't see how killing a knife wielding person is a mission by any means. And where the hell did he get that gun? He was just sent out to catch a murderer with his bare hands? Doesn't make much sense to me.
((( NEEDS WORK )))
Well notbad, but i would have to say either work on your own voice or somthing, the story also needs some depth and detail to it, but notbad for this one...
2 days isnt a lot.
It you dont spend more time then that on your flashes its not that strange that they are not that good.It coud be a lot better if you worked on everythin you made for over a week,the movie Genryus Blade took 5 months to make!If you spend that much time on your movies,you will probably get good!
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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