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Finally it is here, the sequal to "DBZ - Return of Vegetto". This time I improved eveything possible to make this truly superior to my first movie, DO ENJOY! And look out for part 2!!
DBZ character's don't swear that much man. They're more whiney and misunderstood. At least you were faithfull to the fact that they all talk too much. I like dbz, but this flash just didn't do it for me.
You really need to take some writing lessons...
Y'know, I hate to break this news to you, but using 'fuck' in every other sentence is a shitty way to write. I can't tell you how many of these stick/sprite animation that reads like an eight-year-old with an affinity (love) for profanity (cursing). Use some creativity, godammit! Buy a fucking Thesaurus or Dictionary or something. There's a wealth of words, useful words. Words are your friend.
Um....hhhmmmm...... First off...the movie says "Excessive Textual Language".... and another thing is...it wasn't my idea to put in the excessive obscene language.... :S ...my bad on that...but is this what I get for people who actually request me putting in language like this? Geez....I can't satisfy 100% of the fans you know...
I couldn't watch the whole thing with all the off character swearing and speak of male genitalia. You might want to compress the audio next time.
This could go places
This actually entertained me. Not easy to do. The childish dialogue in certain places and even in descriptions (ie: died like a fag- or something) detracted from its artistic value. You should fix that. But I sat through the whole thing. Continue this. I command you, Mortal!
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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