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This episode had alot more scenes but i couldnt figure out how to make the file size smaller but i still think it looks pretty neat, i hope you people like it.
the voice act suck, barely story, i guess it was alright tho
Needs a lot of work on this
The graphics were allright, but the sound needs a lot of work. There was a decent plot behind it, so you did alright there. Keep trying man.
Some OK Camera Shots
It was a little rough, but I liked the way you changed the camera view from close-up to long shot depending on the action. A lot of people don't think of doing that, but it really makes the scenes more interesting to watch.
I really liked the way you did the first guy running with the knife. The second guy wasn't as good--you can see the background through his open mouth.
Also, when you have two people talking to each other, don't put both exactly in the middle of the screen when you cut back and forth between them. Put the left one off to the left a bit and the right one off to the right.
This is especially important when they look very similar (two bald guys in black cloaks). For a second I thought it was the same guy talking when you cut to the second guy.
mmuch better improvement on your first....yea, u lack what i lack, storyline, our senses of humour wins out, and we end up with something bloody that makes you laugh....anyway, nice work, love the more scenes, and ur artwork could use more improvement, just like mine, as like mine your talent is growing....
Hey Sipho, thanks for reviewing my Korin mandel again, and giving me suggestions to improve it. your helping me alot. anyways thanks again!
the vocies were pretty funny, im not sure if they were ment to be , but i thought it was pretty funny. When they faught it was neat. When they were attacking there voicies were very funny. Nice work
hey thanks for reviewing my korin mandel, i appreiciate it. and yeah the voices were meant to be funny.
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