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The third and final installment of my first Flash movie series, "The Mourner." This time he really kicks some @$$. Enjoy!
you have great ideas in all of your animations, little more plot development needed...oh ya, how the HELL could he thrust his hand through the guy...?
but you really need to vision where your taking this, it has protentail, alot of it, i can't wait for more, but you need to build on the story, the woman in the 1st ep. who was she, why was he mourning her, 2nd ep. why id he behead that guy, what happened in his past, 3rd ep. why is he a legend, and why did she know it was him, why did he have the title, where does he come from... you need to answer these uestions to make your series complete, and tbh, i can't wait to see more, keep up the good work.
Your art is really good and the charecter has promise to be really great, the story is simple but driving, it could become an epic flash with a few voiceovers and some smoother movement of the characters limbs and you cant go wrong. really good job, I hope to see another one.
lol i remember this
This submission was made years ago... I remember watching in school while my computer arts teacher wasn't lookin, that must have been like 5 or 6 years ago. Back in the day, this kind of animation was indeed considered kick ass. It's too bad it hasn't become golden with age...
o well ^_^
It was.....ok....no comment.
Just one thing.
Could have used alot more work. I couldnt pay attention to it for that long. Twas really repetative.
A short film about a park bench
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