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Inspired By The Lain Anime Series
got my attention
loved the animation style. 3d is always a plus in my book. music was good. never heard it before but was good. flowed with the pace of the flash. i do agree with a previous review on the whole "blacking" out thing. it chopped up the scene transfers which made the animation harder to follow aesthetically. i want to see more of this in the future without the black outs. good concept, awesome animation.
Thanks. Next time less black outs.
They help keep the file size down, but next time I'll max out at 5 MG =]
I gave you points for Music, and very little else.
Why? cause of 4 things. three maybe.
1- You didnt make the bears legs move much... make them longer and more active.
2-You Blacked out every 3 seconds. dont do that next time, use it once in a while.
3- The staircase scene kinda lost me, as well as the outdoor running (or sliding) around; thus the blacking out didnt help.
4(the maybe reason)- if THAT was supposed to be Lain at the end, Then you mustve been smokin some crack. Lain has brown hair. and its smooth.
I gave you points for the Music, i ADORE that song ^_^, and for giving it a good plot. Just, try to fix the Teddy and the blacking out.
PS: neat use for the matrix stuff as "The Wired".
and in the words of a good flash, and something unrelated....
Ok, thanks. I love the song too =]
that was pretty cool dude. Something I hadn't seen before as far as Lain related things go. Good job with the 3D art, the shadows were done really well. Keep up the good work!
p.s. instead of a 3D Lain, try using an image, didn't look like her at all (she prob wasn't supposed to tho huh)
Thanks. I may take you advic in the next one and maybe draw a Lain.
very nicely done, hope u make more ^^ :)
Thanks, I'm making it a series!
That was some awesome work!
Thank you. Glad you liked it =]
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