it was aight
the story was good but there was lots of spelling mistakes. ya gotta fix those but otherwise good job gonna watch the second one now.
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I adjusted the story a bit... hope you like it :)
Nice!!!
I loved your movie, it was worth the wait. All you need is a little bit of interactivity...i am voting a 5 for this.
slaXor responds:
Yup... thanks
You're right..
The music didn't fit with the movie at all.. but it was a great flash nonetheless! Keep up the good work!
slaXor responds:
Sure thing dude...
great stuff man
i didn't see any wrong with thist flash, just a lot of right ideals.
Great Start
Even though you probably won't use this. Here is my suggestion. Since it is October, maybe you could make fightman into a more Halloween type monster, Where he is unstoppable and he goes around murduring everyone until one day he meets his match.However if you don't use that suggestion then I would just keep it going in the direction it is in. Just maybe up the graphics a little because the storyline is really good.
slaXor responds:
Yeah... I was thinking he should become a Super Saiya-Jin type monster thingy. But the other 2 parts are finished already. Maybe I'll do a remake...