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I wrote this script a few months before I actually made the Flash movie. It wasn't until a few months later when I saw Brian Beaton's "Scrotum the Puppy" series, that I decided to make a Flash movie. And this is the result.
I enjoyed watching this, it was a fun little story and pretty funy as well, the drawings and animation could definitely use some work (ever heard of elbows?), but good use of sound and I got a kick out of it.
haha thanks man... as for the elbows, at the time i was kinda mimicking the south park style (very crudely). which was also a convenient excuse for sucking at computer graphic design. if i had access to a scanner during this era, i would've hand-drawn everything.
Actually pretty good
Yup, this flash was actually quite good. The graphics were really good, and although the tweening the whole bodies thing though looked bad, it was enjoyable to watch. The storyline was compelling, and although I was disappointed that I could see the shooting, the explosion form the poke and the dialog was pretty cool. Just work on your animating skills and you can be very good.
in the lost sequel that's never been seen (*go 2 responses down), i show the people being shot. and there's an even bigger explosion!
the graphics kinda sucked but i loved the idea
i think this was one of the first scripts i wrote. i was 16 and couldn't wait however long it would take to go through the industry and get it made professionally as an animated short. based on the feedback over the years tho, i might actually have these doughboy stories produced officially.
Completly fucking stupid but funny not too bad
The start sucked big time but the rest of the movie was pretty funny, completely fucking stupid but still funny and it wasn't too bad at all, but then with the idea you had it would have been hard to have made this crap. I read in your one of your responses to your reviews you started making a sequel, go on do it finish it off, it couls be brilliant and I hope to see it.
holy shit, i haven't checked up on this submission in like 9 years! i appreciate the feedback.
as for the sequel: i got to pretty much fully animate it up until the end. but due to a virus killing my hard drive, it was never completed. i wanna see if i can retrieve it, maybe finish it off and add a soundtrack. the graphics would still suck, as i made it 10 years ago right after completing production on this. but the story is bigger and more violent, and you get to see the people get shot.
Yeah dat was good did i detect some KoRn in there with the song "Blind" and some Manson aswell? yeah What was happening with the sound it was really stratchy... but i guess thats Net .wavs for ya!! Yeah and maybe you should have a loader instead of stopping it half wasy through to load the rest of it!!
Overall it was Meehhhh
yah that was blind. but it was actually rob zombie, not manson. good guess tho. unfortunately, i made this when didn't know how to make a loader. and then i lost the original file so i couldn't add one. this was when i basically first learned Flash. but maybe one day I'll have something better to show.
After being exiled, the mysterious "Valdoros" must contend with home invaders
Tape One of a pixel animated Horror anthology series.
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