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if this does well ill keep going with the series. its a really big file so PLEASE be patient sorry there's no sound on this one.
pretty good submition
it was aite just needs some music you know something to break the silence
cuz thats one of the few things i dont like... silence *shivers* but over all it was pretty good
No music and too short
little bit concerned with having to right click *button is a must on the next one* .. but when I saw the graphics .. *shivers with excitement* ... problem the silence .. *add some music* ... and it was a shame it was soo short
i didnt even have to upload the thing. its not a big file trust me man. i no when it is. and wat Tesm says , no sound is not good. for a scond i thought mi sound did not work. but it was just the flash. i mena i like the animation. its pretty coo. but u should really work on yur graphic a bit and plz add some sound next time. but over all u did a good job for a begginer. hoping that u can make the contiuned part wit al least some sound to go wit. but other that ur looking at a path of animation work!
Short, but sweet...
I usually don't review people unless i know that they have potential...
this was good...
problems: (1)The mountain/flying scene... the bottom is cut off and you can see the blank part of the screen... (2) No sound, not good at all, can't set the mood properly. (3) Length, although good, wayyy too short, work on it... (4)Plot... too overused... branch off to more creative plains... :)
Good: I liked the graphics and the animation (which was odd at times) but none-the-less average...
All in all, this has some potential... don't worry about size... ppl will see it if its good... at this wasn't bad... good work, and keep it up :)
plain and simple, it was final fantasy crossed with dragonball Z. The graphics were good and the animation was sweet to, i dont know what you mean by the file size being HUGE. it was pretty small for the quality, before you make a sequel you should worry about working with sound and ambient noise, + the plot is 100% the same as final fantasies. good work, and make the next movie longer.
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