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First of all, this movie doesn't have a loader, so give it like 30 seconds, OK.
This is the first movie i submit, so don't expect TOO much.
After I read Chief Seatle's letter, I decided to do this movie, in fact is my Literature homework, but I was running out of time, so it could have been better.
nothing against you, but there is definately room for improvement. it didnt really thrill me at all. you do have alot of potential, but i think you didnt try hard enough on this one. i hope to see better things from you.
Really good and i am glad ur not just submitting rubbish becasue u think your great. OK, the ways to improve this would be, hey don't be imbarrsed that u can't program a preloader, just download the NG one, it works fine, you can find it in learning flash section when submitting a movie. Good use of sprite art but sometimes i didn't know what the hell was going on. Maby try to include some speach.You have potential, do not let it die.
For a first flash, this is pretty damn good, and I'm not just influenced by all of the NES Mega Man connections.
This could be better with a bit more time taken care of, possibly by adding a preloader and a start button.
Make the movie a bit longer, with more of a storyline, and you'll have a great movie.
This is good enough as is though.
Nice stuff, keep it up!
((( COOL )))
Ya a good sprite film with originality and style, the type of sprites is what made it so cool, and the backrounds matched so well, fun to watch aswell, nice job...
I know the guy who made this...lol, I sit next to him. Hey great work man, how long did u take to do it? Why didn´t uo tell me u were doing it? Lol, nice story man, keep up the good work.
Wey, neta te luciste cabron! bien hecho!
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