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Submitted: 05/21/2000 | 03:36PM EST
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Current Score: 2.12 / 5.00
467 votes | 1,214 views
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Blam this piece of crap!
This makes poop look good.
Nothing too new or interesting.
Not bad. In fact… I like it!
This Flash is crunk, fo' shizzle!
Woot!!! All my 5 R belong to this!
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This is my first movie, and suprisingly; it doesn't suck. It shows my exploits disturbing the peace. Just watch the movie, damnit.
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Average Score: 4.0 / 10
"well"
drawings were simple but fine, but animation and facial expressioning were a bit lazy, plot was okay but a bit thin, and it seems like more stuff really should have happened here.
"odd"
Yup, I think odd is probably the right word to describe this flash. The graphics were okay, and the animation was rather poor, you probably could've improve that. Sound was okay as well. I got kinda confused by what was happening. The guy appears and the tank kills the guy, that's basically the plot. Plus you made Lauran's gender confusing, I had no idea which it was.
"*Cough* really bad *Cough*"
That plain sucked... too much suckyness... your stick film was terrible all it proved was that stick characters move more than your character with 3 movements :| Insult them when you recieve talent, This flash was just.. disgraceful to NG and its fans.
"Eh? That was stupid"
Some guy in a tank runs over some blobs, shoots some alien dude then runs some more blobs over, what the fuck? That was just stupid, no fun at all.
"Very good for a first."
I'm judging this as if it were by an experienced person, not a first timer. The animation was fairly poor and could have used more work and effort; however nothing looked really BAD, just rushed and awkward. The film was short, and kind of limited only to the running over of the blobs. However, it was interesting to see. with some work you could be quite good.
