(title in work)
^^Good Points^^
I think you did a good job on both parts of this. The first part you did a good job of building this up, especially with the music, which I think fit perfectly. The ending was pretty unexpected and funny.
^^Needs Improving^^
The graphics weren't that good in some parts. You used a lot of gradients, but not a lot of good shading, which is what really makes things look nice.