Not very good...
Three complaints, one about this flash specifically and two for the author:
1. This had nothing to do with Metroid.
2. "Common" does not mean "come on" (and doesn't even sound like "come on"), it means "of or relating to the community at large." If you're giving the dialogue as text, you really need to figure out a better way of using slang.
3. The use of profanity doesn't make you cool, and it definitely doesn't make your flashes better. If profanity is appropriate, it can add to the meaning of a piece. Your animations have an overabundance of profanity, none of which is necessary for character development or plot advancement, so it destroys the quality of your submissions.
Basically, if you take out your random and worthless profanity and make your stories more about what they claim to be about, you'd be a much better flash artist.