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I made this yesterday and wanted some feedback. Don't grade it as if it was a movie cause it's not. Grade it on wether you think it's a good flash intro.
I guess it's a good intro, but why does it say "Kills Bugs Dead"? Is that an attempt at comedy? I don't think most people get it. Maybe if you showed a carton of spray that had that on it, and printed it out and took a picture, people might get the joke.
it was a decent intro, and the sound effects were fine, the logo, "kills bugs dead" was kind of funny, but mostly stupid, and this really isn't any good as a standalone flash.
As an intro it wasn't too bad, I enjoyed it. The movements worked, the sound was good, and it was fun to watch. However, I don't really see a reason why you just submitted only an intro on to the portal. I mean, you could have made a good flash movie to go along with it since the intro was good, but not much that can be done now.
This is just a "made by scene!" And this passed judgement? I worked really hard on my short sprite turorial and (although it was pretty close) it got blammed. All this is is an intro with decent effects...and it passes? Words can not discribe my anger wight now...
Anyway, on to an actual review. The effects were pretty nice, but its ruined by the fact that there isn't actually a movie to watch here. If you had maybe made an actual flash movie and put this in here, I wouldn't be so horribly surprised that it passed judgement. You may have a future in flash...if you begin to make movies instead of just fancy intros!
Why did you submit an intro? You wanted feedback surely you could have just asked some mates instead of submitting this to Newgrounds, I hate it when people submit previews, but an intro now that takes the piss.
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