Score: 10
"Excellent Stuff Keep Em' Comin'!"
date: September 23, 2003
This series is really funny and entertaining, I don't say this often, but this is way too good to be a flash cartoon, you should send some of this stuff to Fox or Comedy Central and see what they think. Also, you should stick with the episode to episode connection, or maybe switch to a new story after every four or five episodes so new comers to the series don't have to watch a million episodes to get up to date, this is like an excellent twisted soap opera and I'm loving every minute of it. Also, I think you should do something more dialogue-wise to develop Hector's character, the "dead brother" jokes are way more hilarious than seeing him get hurt and killed in every episode, that's already been done to death in South Park, I'd much rather like to see more of him expressing himself verbally in a goofy way that pokes fun at his death, than physical comedy, but this is your cartoon so don't mind me too much, just my thoughts. One last note, I hope their dad isn't something supernatural, it's cool how everyone has their own sick unhealthy obsession so I can't wait to see what the Dad's is, he must be pretty sick to not be welcome to live with the family, unless I'm mistaken and he does. I just figured since the girl knew she would be alone for weeks the father must not be a part of their lives on a regular basis, sorry about this long review but I'm just really stoked about this cartoon, you're really onto something big and don't let anyone tell you different, great job Pzuto.
Author's Response:
I thank you frodo for being a great supporter of my work. You're reviews have been a great catalyst to my enthusiasm to continue the series.
The 4th episode is in the works, and hopefully it will answer the questions people, like yourself, have been wanting answered.
I have had a few people suggest sending this to the networks, so it might be an option for me in the future.
I hope to complete it by the end of next week (last wk of sept.), so keep an eye out!