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.....I dunno......I just wanted to make a cartoon until I got some voice actors, cause right now i'm the only one. God I'm so pathetic. This is my very first cartoon (no duh).

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Average Score: 7.9 / 10

Score: 5

"Nice Job"

by: Blaklyon

date: July 19, 2007

It made me laugh so, that counts for something! As you play around with it flash more, you will get better at it. All you need is the passion to learn. What version of flash are you using? I'm still using Flash 8.

June 6, 2008

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Right now I'm just using Flash MX. It's good for the amount of times I animate....which is never...

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Score: 4

"It's okay"

by: Ivaron

date: April 14, 2007

It's okay, but it really doesn't have a point. Well, I guess the only reasons the idiots here gave you a high score was because of the boobs joke. Sorry but drawn boobs don't turn me on ;)
Why didn't you just use a webcam? It would've saved you the trouble of drawing it :P

I don't think this is as good as it's cracked up to be, but hey it's drawn alot better than most first cartoons, so you get points for that.
Not great, but atleast it's not crappy. And I did like that you made fun of yourself. But please get a better mic, or use a sound editing program, cuz that noise pretty much blew it. And it was a bit boring too.