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I'll try to respond to all reviews, I need some Constructive critisism to improve my work! If a reviewer just gives zeros in the review for no apparent reason, I'll assume they no nothing about anything.
The animation was ok, I mean you knew what was what, and the jokes were good. Sound as somebody else said, short and to the point. I defineltly think you could do it better, but hey,I know your next animation will be better,
A bit short really
This flash is short, but fun. There's a nice mix of humour, and the graphics are simple but effective. Sounds are short and to the point. Next time, try making it a little bit longer and it should score higher, right now it's good but it could be better.
Although you really need more jokes, and more of a storyline. The part where he steals the money was the main funny scene of the movie.
You should implement more humor through more jokes or a longer movie. Your graphics were excellent though. I liked your shading effects and your animation style.
You should try and work on the movie longer to make it more polished..also make it longer lengthwise.
All this in account, you should make your next movie even better..w00t.
Keep 'em coming Broccoli.
The next one will be extensively longer and have way more of a plot and even better drawings!!!
haha take that Guitar clock!
haha awesome brocolli.
keep up the evil deeds, brocoli!
bloodstains are a bitch to clean up.
A look at the first day of Lucina in Super Smash
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