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This is my first Flash movie, so I need some feedback !¡ The plot is up to you !
Shut up pimpkitty
This is very good for a first submission. And it was 3 seconds loading time, not 30. Go get a new computer, maybe even get off of windows 95 and upgrade you idiot. Better than my first submissions XD.
It wasd a good short little story...
I think that if you added alittle bit more story behind the character it would be better but. All around good work
that was great
this is a great peice of flash, the jerkoff before me who complained and said it should be blamed is a fucking retard.
keep up the great work friend.
short but satisfying :D
Despite being surprinsgly short i liked the style of this and thought it mayeb even ahd a littke message to give out. I really liked the way you conveyed the mood at the beginning of the movie with the sunrise and music. anyway though short it was enjoyable - well done with this :)
Great story with a intresting ending
basically if your dumb and shoot guns and act stupid then someone will blast a cap in ur ass
this flash while old is excellent
great music to set the mood and awesome graphics
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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