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May 20, 2000 | 6:27 PM EDT

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This is my first Flash movie, so I need some feedback !¡ The plot is up to you !


Cheers. Andy



Rated 3 / 5 stars


It was middle class. It wasn't compelling, it wasn't a marvel... it was however short. It was probably about 2 minutes long and was quite pointless. Meh...


Rated 4 / 5 stars


Im sure you have become allot more adapt at animation by now but for a first attemt this was quite good... its simplicity is what appealed to me the most... good stuff


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

newgrounds musta liked it because

dam it looks just like the new layout


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Not bad at all

like the last dude said just a little work but we cant beat u up about it, it was your first but keep trying and of course u'll get better


Rated 4 / 5 stars

not bad

i dont really get what the story is about but still its a good style with the silouettes its good but the graphices wernt amazing little bit more time and it would be perfection to the max