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This is my first Flash movie, so I need some feedback !¡ The plot is up to you !
It was middle class. It wasn't compelling, it wasn't a marvel... it was however short. It was probably about 2 minutes long and was quite pointless. Meh...
Im sure you have become allot more adapt at animation by now but for a first attemt this was quite good... its simplicity is what appealed to me the most... good stuff
newgrounds musta liked it because
dam it looks just like the new layout
Not bad at all
like the last dude said just a little work but we cant beat u up about it, it was your first but keep trying and of course u'll get better
i dont really get what the story is about but still its a good style with the silouettes its good but the graphices wernt amazing little bit more time and it would be perfection to the max
Second-Year Animation Film (2015)
If you try eating the Mouse Cleaning Service, you gonna have a bad time...
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