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This is my first Flash movie, so I need some feedback !¡ The plot is up to you !
Good... For a First time
No offence but, you gotta have a more apropriate storyline, but all in all, good shot for a first time.
Actually really good for a first flash, but I would've enjoyed more action, I mean no affense but a guy trieds to shoot someone and get shot, not that exciting? The gunshot sounds were kinda...arcade-like I wasn't fond of that...but it's not too bad overall.
Pretty decent 1st outing
I like the minimalist style you used. Music fit very nicely. Tad on the brief side. But you know what you're doing. Keep working on it. Will love to see more plot.
Not bad at all
Hi, good flash, regarding 2 be your first.
When u make frame of window make sure the background in front of the building should differs from outside. U can also add some frame 2 this window so itll give afilling of a window.
The back part of the gun is missing at all, so add it.
Make ur characters walking instead of just movin next time.
when somebody holding a gun it's ussually not so close to body as u made it. Overall good first time effort.
by the way - liked the music.
Hell i cant make movies an shit, an if its your first one then its alright
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